Sothe... IN COLOR

I can't tell if I'm done with this or not... I like it but... Idk it feels like something is missing... oh... anyway I'm posting it anyway, if I figure it out I'll update it... any advice on what is missing if you can see it (I can't...) just lemme know and I'll fix it up.

Oh and I'm sick... Sad day. but I sang karaoke last night to Blink 182's 'What's my age again?' and had some fun.